I was given wonderful constructive criticism about my poetry, which stated that it stops short from the potential it has. I could not agree more from the pseudo to the classic poetry perspectives, however from the beginning of this blog, I stated that I never edit my work, it stands for something and the creative process that imbues from it. The motive is the motion of emotion that transpires from the writing, when too much thought is put into the writing, it denotes the qualitative meaning as the relationship from the artist and his medium bond. I firmly do not disagree, all work can be edited into a plethora different ways, which could then alter the message entirely, yet you have a stand-alone piece of work that has deviated away from its original intent.
I titled this blog 1VERSE for the relationship that all accumulated writings are written under the pretense of 1 epic verse with 1 breath spoken into existence as time progresses. The original aspect is that the poetry I have displayed is equivalent to the scribbles, scratched out words, misspellings, crooked writings that are found within my journal; all in its raw form and element, just in digital context. I wanted to personalize the blog with a human touch without dressing.
I welcome and thank all open forms of constructive criticism, especially when it allows me to focus on how the reader interprets or follows my work. As I revise and edit the formatting of my writings for the upcoming book, I find myself more receptive.
Thank you for your feedback and support.
September 2, 2008
Creative Process
August 11, 2008
Truants
By Charles Sapp II
Those truant to the encompassing magnitude of tribunal gatherings,
where the world has spoken in unison.
As the perilous planet pirouettes through space,
beings cling to her surface with heads bowed with prayers of mercy.
The future has come,
what was told has been said;
what was written has been read.
Time’s translucent dictation of the past
and reoccurring present, will heed no more warnings.
The Earth has crumbled under the sheer weight of burden,
and trees have walked away with their roots.
The untamed wind hunts stealth with savage fierceness
and the tumultuous seas trespass the shore’s boundaries
in pursuit for vindication from unlawful treason.
The soil that has given birth to nameless children,
must now identify their selves.
The watchful eye of the Sun will now look away
as the Moon marks shame to the naked walkers of the night.
The planet will claim its independence as it existed before.
The world has spoken,
we have not listened,
evolution is in progress;
the delay is negligent
and time will not wait.
August 5, 2008
Love Offering
Picture taken on 8/2/08 Reservation Beach, Marina CA.
This is my hundredth post and I wanted to commemorate it with the parallel loves of my life which is my soon to be wife and my writing. My two loves have transcended my expression and experience, during the darkest moments in my life and allowed me to see the full picture; the purity of simplicity and the beauty of entirety which encompasses all with the grace of love.
By Charles Sapp II
I’ve solidified the rain and summoned the Sun’s presence,
showcasing the crystalline beauty of diamonds falling from the sky.
I’ve presented this offering of love
to the one that I love.
She teleported herself through the ether of dreams from the future,
six years of riding on memory’s back,
she made her way to my heart.
Full and complete she filled my mind with strength and will.
The ambient foreshadow of reunited energies,
coalesced into a fire to never become extinguished.
She delivered me Red-Hots in a heart bag, with the scent of Pearberry lotion
so I may never forget her scent.
My love plot thickens,
as I envision us walking the opalescent sands of distant destinations
to wed our fate and cherish humble beginnings
as our lives have transformed and journeyed thus far.
She is the enlightenment I’ve sought for,
her presence makes my soul complete.
Destiny watches with magnificence and pride,
as it resurrected something beautiful from an ugly past.
Receptive to her love,
I deliver her my trust and respect,
I bow to her grace and look deep into her eyes
and allow my soul to speak
as it recites my pledge, my testament, and my verse
throughout eternity’s lifetime.
August 4, 2008
Spirit Child
By Charles Sapp II
The spirit child
separating truth and wisdom with the sleight of tongue.
With the familiarity of attractive forces,
vaporous verses spewed from the lips of a hungry mouth,
summoning the creation of imagination with ghostly appearances.
In pursuit for love inhabited in the most inhospitable regions of the heart and mind;
the spirit child within lives.
The spirit is found in all,
the mystery of the subsequent is solved
by planting seeds of the future to procure our longevity.
The tight grasp of child's hands clasped into ours,
while awaiting the tide of change to rise;
wading in shallow waters,
feet become soaked as careful steps made towards the depths of the unknown.
The spirit child,
evokes the innocence and nourishment of love
within our co-existence concerning all matters of the heart.
The living verse spoken into existence and living breath inflating the lungs
while inquisitive nature hunts for answers as hunger propels the need for growth.
Remember the child’s comforting gaze,
transferring the strength and power we were once born with
as life is the adventure of acquired knowledge
and truth is the back-drop of its inspired essence.
August 1, 2008
The Conductor
By Charles Sapp II
The germination of thoughts
spreading like wildflowers across the landscape of hillside ruminations,
musing over blissful clouds and meandering through sunset motifs.
Events of silent moments piqued by the crescendo of nature’s dialogue,
symphonized harmoniously with wing patterns beating against the wind,
as the sound of inspiration culminates and leads into artistic action.
Captivated by the orchestration of life playing live,
a personal concerto,
with the dim light mood and the nocturnal accompaniment
presents an evening of dancing silhouettes beneath the luminous moon
where silver incandescence sparkles like liquid mirages
transforming the landscape to a stage for the stars
Thoughts conceived and given birth to introspection
where life beckons and existence is animated by experience.
The energy seeps through the Earth and enters the body;
as a conductor, the written sermon, a testament of living power
transcendent upon all creatures great and small
living in unison,
beneath the heavens we play our part.
July 28, 2008
Voice
I have pondered and reflected on the age of my writing and its process. I found that it was influenced greatly by various of my favorite writers and poets. I realized that my voice was a mirror of those that I aspired to be like. I was most influenced by those that had a knack to verbally paint pictures with descriptive ease and utilized the powerful imagery to motivate, inspire and reflect.
By Charles Sapp II
I’ve been searching for decades for my voice,
foreign and unfamiliar it has been.
My voice has been hidden beneath the layers of influence and inspiration,
found within the writers and poets of the past and present;
my identity was not of its own.
My voice
became the voice of Saul Williams’ spoken word that was heard from the distance
and echoed the whispers of Khalil Gibran and the words from the Prophet
and the Neon Vernacular of Yusef Komunyakaa illuminated my written verses.
The power of these writers and countless others have transformed my voice
and the development of heightened states of awareness.
My voice,
surfacing through the ages towards maturity
and conceptualized to define the soul and spirit of the collective,
My voice is merely the intertwined vocal intonations of self,
manifested through my predecessor’s dialectic wisdom.
My voice,
verbal with optimism as it reflects the surface of galactic waters,
and reverberates the serum of truth that pours out of each spirit encountered,
while journeying through the vocal cords of life.
My voice
has grown, enriched vision
with human awareness coalesced with cosmic concoctions
that speaks my words into existence.
My voice is the voice of humanity,
my voice is the soul that is buried deep within,
my voice has always been my voice,
made up of you and me.